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Though Evertonians Strongly Characterise Objectivity
They Engage Some Careless obtrusiveness
Tesco Earns Shareholders Cash Obviously
The Everton Stadium Carries Opportunity
The Environment Supports Car-parking Overload
Through Endeavour Sometimes Casualties Occur
Tough Entrepreneurs Show Correct Overview
Taking Extra Seats Cuts Overheads
Troublesome Everton Supporters Communicate Openly
This Explains Some Constant Obduracy
Tokenism Endangers Solidarity Causing Obedience
Talking Eradicates Silly Conspiracy Outpourings
Together Everton Supporters Carry On
The Everton Story Continues Onwards
John Patrick McFarlane,
Lancs Posted 24/06/2007 at 21:30:10
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Well done JP - any one of these lines could have been used in a crossword clue to define, initially, the shop owned by the woman who subverted democracy in Westminster (you have to know your 1980’s political history for this to make sense). I believe Lady Porter is alive and at large living in Israel, but could be wrong. I don’t think she paid her council tax before she went, or was it millions in fines?
You went for the sonnet form of poetry and were hampered by your obsession with a well known chain of supermarkets, but you must be praised for the thought. I’m no archivist of these pages, but do we often get poetic contributions to TW?
I would suggest a closed season, sorry, window, poetry festival for our beloved site if it didn’t put too hard a burden on the editorial team filtering out contributions of the
"Roses are red, Roses are white, Everton’s blue, Redshite is shite" variety.
Cultured football, cultured comment - I’m all for it.
John....I worry for you.
Thinking Erratically, Seek Council Old-boy!!
Steve Claringbold
Posted 25/06/2007 at 10:22:58
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Every little helps......
Is David Kipps related to Paola Kipps playing for Benefica’s youth team ?
Think John should get a life or a girl-friend if he has time to mess about writing slogans spelling Tesco, he ain’t got much of a life!!
Patty, dearest chuck, naming members of Benfica’s Youth Team and advising on how to live one’s life? Ciao.
John Patrick McFarlane
Posted 25/06/2007 at 17:16:26
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Patty , I’m sorry but I spent a whole 30 minutes of my life writing that experimental piece. Some people watch soaps , some do gardening I like to write. I am surprised at the variety of responses and appreciate that it was at least read by somebody. By the way Patty what are you doing tonight? (lol)
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1 Posted 24/06/2007 at 23:35:54
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You went for the sonnet form of poetry and were hampered by your obsession with a well known chain of supermarkets, but you must be praised for the thought. I’m no archivist of these pages, but do we often get poetic contributions to TW?
I would suggest a closed season, sorry, window, poetry festival for our beloved site if it didn’t put too hard a burden on the editorial team filtering out contributions of the
"Roses are red, Roses are white, Everton’s blue, Redshite is shite" variety.
Cultured football, cultured comment - I’m all for it.